One of the visitors to my web site confirmed something that had been nagging me for a while. The phrase “suck cock” is actually too vulgar for a product description. I was going to use the phrase because Google already sends people searching on the phrase to my web site. But I wasn’t happy with it.
I make an effort to write quality erotic hypnosis, not porn. And yesterday, one of my web site visitors confirmed my suspicion that the phrase would probably scare away more customers than it would attract. So I rewrote the description using classy (well less vulgar) terms like fellatio and oral sex.
I also rewrote the description to appeal to women directly instead of husbands and boyfriends. Still don’t know which approach is best, but I think I’ll go with this for now.